Characterization (until the end)
Write about the relationship between two characters and how it is changing or developing. What are the characteristics of the relationship? What does it work or not work? What is changing? How do they effect one another?
It’s almost
obvious that I’m going to write about the relationship between Christopher and
his father Ed. In the beginning of the book they were very close. His dad
always tried to do the best for him. He placed the food in the bowl, so they
wouldn’t touch and he didn’t make any yellow or brown food. He didn’t hug him
because Christopher didn’t like it even when he sometimes really wanted to. Also
when he came In the prison to pick him up he was really calm with Christopher. This
can be a very hard skill sometimes.
But when
Christopher found out about the lies it was over. To be honest I can totally
relate. If my father would’ve done that I would probably never speak to him
again. But his mother realized very fast that she can’t do it on her own. I
think that’s also the reason she wants them two to trust each other again.
His father
did a very big mistake, but I have to say that he really did a lot to show Christopher
how sorry he is. Especially the dog was a nice idea. I hope for them that it’ll
be the same again for them.
(203 words)
good. But: "The father MADE a big mistake".
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